argumentative intros
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Avril Lavigne once said, “ I was eating bad stuff. Lots’ of sugar and carbs, junk food all the time. It makes you very irritated.” These wise words that Avril spoke are something everybody should consider. In the article Sugar-Free School the author is trying to get his/her readers to consider that maybe taking junk-food out of schools could benefit the children in a very positive way. By taking out sugar filled foods from schools the schools has noticed a change in the children, what the children buy and how much money the schools is spending. Schools definitely should play a part in watching what the students eat.
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“ Watch your thoughts, they become words. Watch your words they become actions. Watch your actions, they become habits. Watch your habits, they become character. Watch your character for it becomes your destiny.” Patrick Overton speaks the truth, telling us that just our thoughts could be what shapes us into the person we are today or in the future. In the article Are Bullies Criminals it shows how just one thought of a girl these bullies had and just one action these bullies took can cause something so severe as suicide. Bullies abuse others mentally, can hurt others physically and in extreme cases cause their victim to commit suicide. Bullies are criminals they abuse others mentally and physically and therefore they should be punished for what harm they have caused.
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“Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.” Helen Keller speaks these words telling us if we don’t take risks and go on adventures are we really doing anything with our lives? In the article Your Next Vacation: Outer Space it talks about that in a year they will allow people to go up into outer space for a vacation. During the ride passengers get to experience something they never had before, amazing views of earth, and weightless floating. Taking risks and going on adventures is a crucial part of life.
Avril Lavigne once said, “ I was eating bad stuff. Lots’ of sugar and carbs, junk food all the time. It makes you very irritated.” These wise words that Avril spoke are something everybody should consider. In the article Sugar-Free School the author is trying to get his/her readers to consider that maybe taking junk-food out of schools could benefit the children in a very positive way. By taking out sugar filled foods from schools the schools has noticed a change in the children, what the children buy and how much money the schools is spending. Schools definitely should play a part in watching what the students eat.
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“ Watch your thoughts, they become words. Watch your words they become actions. Watch your actions, they become habits. Watch your habits, they become character. Watch your character for it becomes your destiny.” Patrick Overton speaks the truth, telling us that just our thoughts could be what shapes us into the person we are today or in the future. In the article Are Bullies Criminals it shows how just one thought of a girl these bullies had and just one action these bullies took can cause something so severe as suicide. Bullies abuse others mentally, can hurt others physically and in extreme cases cause their victim to commit suicide. Bullies are criminals they abuse others mentally and physically and therefore they should be punished for what harm they have caused.
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“Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.” Helen Keller speaks these words telling us if we don’t take risks and go on adventures are we really doing anything with our lives? In the article Your Next Vacation: Outer Space it talks about that in a year they will allow people to go up into outer space for a vacation. During the ride passengers get to experience something they never had before, amazing views of earth, and weightless floating. Taking risks and going on adventures is a crucial part of life.